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 Mellowing Reverie (Dream)
 
 7/22/2008 2:13:24 PM
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Mellowing Reverie (Dream)
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Posted on behalf of subtlesree

 

Mellowing Reverie

 

An intellect in thee nourishes a seedling of the Thought

The Thought is a drop of a Desire

 

A Desire worth accomplishing over a Lifespan

A Lifespan that is uncertain to Thee

 

Thee have this dream, served with Uncertainties

Uncertainties are but conditional manifestations

 

Manifestations though be a replica of a Prospect

Prospect seasoned by an equal amount of Prudence

 
Prudence embellished in attainment of the sought Purport

The sought Purport takes its leisured time

 
Leisured time has its reason, thee ought to Infer

Infer the lessons that multiples thy Vision

 
Vision so picturesque of the Mellowing Reverie

The Mellowing Reverie thee behold is come to Reality.

 7/22/2008 2:24:12 PM
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Re: Mellowing Reverie (Dream)

Posted on behalf of Maddy

Your poem has an ethereal feel to it. Very different, I felt the impact of the words when i read it out loud.

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