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 White Rose of Agra
 
 7/22/2008 2:07:10 PM
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White Rose of Agra
 Modified By admin  on 7/22/2008 8:10:35 AM)

Posted on behalf of Leonora_Srivatsan

White Rose of Agra

 

Many have walked-

the paths of the Taj Mahal.

Its green lawns of velvet

All covered with flowers.

 
The white rose in a distance,

its dome shines in the light.

The four minarets at its corner,

can be seen from afar.

Oh! what a marvelous sight.

 
The white flower blossoms-

on the bank of the river.

River "Yamuna" she is called,

She flows on forever and ever.

 
White marble stone that glows,

under the moon light.

All built for the love of a lady,

who was his adorable wife.

 
Red sand stone walls, protect -

the rose and give her peace.

Laid to rest all down beneath.

 
With precious stones embedded-

in marble so white.

The king Shah Jahan and queen Mumtaz,

are left to rest in the silence of the night.

 
This is the most beautiful love poem ever told.

To mark their passion and give glory to their souls.

By Leonora Srivatsan, Bangalore, India


Leonora S

 

 7/22/2008 2:11:10 PM
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Re: White Rose of Agra

Posted on behalf of punam

Probably the first time that a poet has compared the Taj to a white rose. Nice use of metaphor here. Also, your reference to the Taj Mahal itself as a love poem in the last two lines is so apt.

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