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 12/5/2007 5:27:53 PM
Chillimentor
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Chillimentor rating Re: The CF Editing Challenge-1

Chillimentor Rating: 2/5

Chillimentor Comments: This is a good effort by the editor. The editor has been proactive and has added content to the existing paragraph. However, there are some errors that have been totally missed. The language is not entirely global.

Suggestions: Try to stay within the parameters of the content provided. Also make sure the original content is completely error free.

 

 raosrinivasr wrote

 

GLOBALIZATION LEADING TO PROCESS OUTSOURCING

Globalization has led us into an unthought-of and unsought era where a buyer is now exposed to a promising set of suppliers. By virtue of globalization,we can expand our business from our home country location to locations outside our country.The initial set of barriers like geographical reach, language etc. no longer exists thanks mainly to Internet,E-Mail,Telecalling.Fierce rivalry is forcing businesses to adapt more optimum processes for effective resource utilization leading to the phenomenon of outsourcing. The success in the local business generally leads to outsourcing of process business by opting for a large number of qualified & competent employees worldwide.The globalization which leads to outsourcing benefits almost all companies & a large number of clients,customers because of flexibility in opting for qualifed workers/employees which leads to Quality Oriented Architecture in the overall business.Firms are striving towards achieving that ideal, by concentrating entirely on their core activity and outsourcing all the supplementary activities.

 12/6/2007 4:24:15 AM
aquarita
1 posts


Re: The CF Editing Challenge-1

The editing challenge

Part 1

 

Now with an increased awareness of dental health, more and more people are focussing on prevention rather than cure. To be more successful dentists will now have to provide a highly personalized health service to their patients. While there are no definite criteria available on one’s choice of dentist the following guidelines can help one make an intelligent choice.

 

The editing challenge

 

Part 3

 

The highlight of one’s stay in Puri is to witness the Rath Yatra. First the deities are taken out of the temple, to the rhythmic beat of drums and chanting of prayers by thousands of devotees and placed in their respective chariots. The King of Puri then sweeps the chariots with a golden broom to signal the start of the procession. The Rath is then pulled by the devotees and taken to the Gundicha Temple.

 

 12/6/2007 3:05:46 PM
drstak
1 posts


Re: The CF Editing Challenge-1
With the increasing health awareness people have come to realize that preventive dental care is more cost-effective than curative dental health. Dental care involve many aspects as different patient has different problem hence need for personalized health care. As there are many sub specialties in dental surgery patient often get confused. In next paragraph there are pointers that can help you make an intelligent decision.
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